passaleth: Critique : "When I wrote the stories that were released in February, it was after a long struggle filled period of time, where unable to fund a professi..."

When I wrote the stories that were released in February, it was after a long struggle filled period of time, where unable to fund a professional editor my wife, Rosalind and I decided that self editing was how it must be. I am extremely proud of SOLITUDE and although THE FARMED is a decent enough story, part of me wishes that I had only released Solitude and taken more time to build hte structure of The Farmed and give it the time it deserved rather than thinking that the book would have been too small with just one of the stories contained within its cover. But Hey Ho! The experience of publishing and having a book published is one of the single most important experiences that I have ever had, it has given me a belief in my own ability, my next story Edan Corc , will be produced in a more professional manner, the editing process and the characters will and are being given more consideration, and unlike previous stories I know how it ends, all I have to do now is take Edan on his j...